Am I allowed to touch you?
Do I have to stop being me?
When I want to feel you must I pull away?
If I were to fall would you catch me?
Am I in a nightmare that I can't wake from?
Am I suddenly nothing?
Is there a point to all this anymore?
Will you take my soul and leave me empty?
Make the world stop just for a moment.
I'll just close my eyes and let go of life.
I love this. Wow. I can sense the mystery in this, and I love it. You make it obvious to your readers that you haven't lived the easiest of lives, but you're keeping most intricate details to yourself. I really admire that in a fellow writer. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for your comment! It means a lot that others also enjoy my writing. Writing from personal experience isn't always easy to show others, but you are right that I give details without specifics most of the time as in this.
Which is exactly what I love about that particular part of work. It takes a good writer to paint such a good picture, but it takes a great writer to express emotion such as that with so little exposition. You also make your writing relatable to your readers. Again, another trait of a great writer. You are fantastic!
Loved it, it reminds me of the past, something that I'm glad to be past now