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Just looking at her
So much you still don't understand.
Pieces inside you are unable to see.
Blind to what she wants,
What she really wants . . .

She wants to be . . .
The one in your dreams
Always on your mind, in your thoughts
Special
Perfect for you as imperfect as she is right now
Part of your life, your future

She wants to feel . . .
Loved
Forever wanted, ever needed
Good enough even at her worst

She wants to see . . .
Love in your eyes
A tomorrow together with you

She wants to know . . .
What you are thinking
The things that you feel
For you there is only her and no other will do
She is the half of you that was missing
Simply that you love her each and every day

Did you ever take a moment
Stop and notice
What she wants,
What she really wants . . .

is YOU.

Well poetry can just sneak up on you sometimes. This one popped inside my head about an hour ago in a few tiny pieces while I was listening to music. It ended up being something that just flowed. Hope you like it.



She Wants Jennifer Clark
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Effing Loved it! So deep and sad but adorable at the sametime <3
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ThornZfire Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Thank you. I think that's the best comment I've gotten on my poetry in a good while.
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it helps when it applies personally :p
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ThornZfire Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I never thought about it that way since all my poems are personal. Thank you
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colorless-winter Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i love this it makes feel like im the girl who knows hat she wants but the guy i like acts like just a friend and we barely talk but i wish he could see this and think of me but i dont think that will ever happen, anyway i love this poem alot
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ThornZfire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. I'm glad that the poem meant something to you. The best part is that for all those who can't see what you yourself want, there is one special person out there that will.
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nos22 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it, It makes me think of a girl that I like alot :) great job, I can't wait to read your next entry
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ThornZfire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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